Life Span Of A Car Starter Is This A Good Starter To A Mini Book?

Is this a good starter to a mini book? - life span of a car starter

* My friend has this and I need input from a few more people. Only the first paragraph .*


I walked down the street with tears smudging mascara on her cheeks, and his lifeless body. Around the world are not in his head at the moment only the sound of his own thoughts - thoughts, was the collapse at any time. Over a period of twenty-four hours he had lost his father, the man she loved, and his brother. His thoughts were about a subject, death. How could God be so cruel to take three of her relatives? Why now, why her, why? What I did to deserve this? Each question was repeated in his head, hiding on every step. She continued to go without thinking about everything around him. The horn of a car Speeding. The right to his past, he has from his trance, she had no fear aroused, despite the fact that he knew that he is almost dead. Life had become unbearable for her, and she does not care about the greatest care. Life value, if they do nothing? Although he still had his mother and sister of the area? No, not them - since the ninth class. Everything in his life yesterday they had killed, in a figurative sense.